I am not sure on how i feel on the changes you have made yet but and interesting plot and campaign. I can’t stop reading.Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-08 06:18:54What happened to Marcus?Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-16 16:05:08I love all of the chapters and I hope you don’t let anyone tell you otherwise
ethanschoenheitanonymous readerReport 2013-07-20 14:02:50As someone that understands the storytelling style you are using I will say not bad. xx video Great story I completely understand what your saying about it being from his point of view and so we get what he is thinking even if that is alot about sindee. Great story I completely understand what your saying about it being from his point of view and so we get what he is thinking even if that is alot about sindee. Doesn’t detract from the story at
