Please stop writing and find another hobby. x video The problems that I had was the constant shifting between different points of view. The second problem was that it became repetitive. dude, dont copy! dont be a pussy!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-06 00:34:09Oh the humanity! This became confusing after awhile. There was no change is style between the different characters. This became confusing after awhile. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-23 02:27:44this. SHIT. Please stop writing and find another hobby. The second problem was that it became repetitive. Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? The second problem was that it became repetitive. is. dude, dont copy!
