I suggest you return to the basics of storytelling. All in all an OK story, for a 16 yo.READERReport 2005-09-26 04:56:29where in the world did this “writer” learn English? xvideos Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? The language was average (please never ever say ‘love tunnel’ again), the structure was OK, the plot left a little to be desired. In China? All in all an OK story, for a 16 yo.READERReport 2005-09-26 04:56:29where in the world did this “writer” learn English? 6 comments«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. … All in all an OK story, for a 16 yo.READERReport 2005-09-26 04:56:29where in the world did this “writer” learn English?
