although a bit to the point.«12» So cliche I could have told the story after the first few sentences.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-26 02:13:07Wow, this story really contains everything doesn’t it? Keep it up, and you might have less haters. xx video Keep it up, and you might have less haters. Keep up this writing style, under 14 years is just too young, and I’m 16 sooo. …anonymous readerReport 2011-10-13 22:21:25Woah, major change in your writing technique. Fairly well written. Keep it up, and you might have less haters. So cliche I could have told the story after the first few sentences.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-26 02:13:07Wow, this story really contains everything doesn’t it? Keep it up, and you might have less haters. Very nice.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-19 22:06:36Kewl you shloud come up with that. Keep it up, and you might have less
