The writing errors detracted from the story.«1» The content is good but the manner in which it is presented is pitiful. That should tell the writer something–That the story is not a good one. xx video 3 comments«1»READERReport 2007-09-15 15:57:00Over 13,000 viewers and only 2 now 3 comments. She gets a 10 from meREADERReport 2005-08-23 17:41:26The story would have been a lot better if the writing had been much better than it was. The content is good but the manner in which it is presented is pitiful. 3 comments«1»READERReport 2007-09-15 15:57:00Over 13,000 viewers and only 2 now 3 comments. The writing errors detracted from the story.«1» The content is good but the manner in which it is presented is pitiful.
