The story has potential, but the spelling, grammar, and technical details were horrendous and ought to be checked before publishing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 10:28:23IJWTS wow! it has potential«1» Add more details or have coach get some treatment for premature ejaculation.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-15 01:35:22{adding…} “read it over” with a fine-toothed spell-checker, as well as a good grammar-checker. xvideos drag it out more. {intentional words} I joust love when the word is spelled write, butt utterly the rung won to use their.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-14 23:07:37kinda harsh Ghostrider939… drag it out more. it has potential«1» 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through. it has potential«1» 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through.
