I cant wait to read part two! xxvideo for me?(:Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-01 11:36:23This story was GREAT. I cant wait to read part two! Confusing. Confusing. I hope u write a 2nd one.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-27 10:58:18The switching between first and third person was a little confusing at first, but wasnt that bad. for me?(:Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-01 11:36:23This story was GREAT. I hope u write a 2nd one.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-27 10:58:18The switching between first and third person was a little confusing at first, but wasnt that bad. 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-25 23:29:26Amazing story! 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-25 23:29:26Amazing story! 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-25 23:29:26Amazing story! But the twist, DAMN!!«12» All and all ill give it a 4/5. But with the second part you should develop the relationship a bit. for me?(:Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-01 11:36:23This story was GREAT. The twist was pretty good
