Writing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-19 01:39:43a nice story but a quick end, next time try to create some more dramaYoungAuthorReport 2009-03-07 16:08:39not bad at all! No matter how asleep they were. x video Writing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-19 01:39:43a nice story but a quick end, next time try to create some more dramaYoungAuthorReport 2009-03-07 16:08:39not bad at all! Preferably the opposite Sex. The story may only slightly gain but u have learned. . . Other tip at this level write, check, edit, put away for 3 days and check and edit again. . U would have just fallen asleep. Well done. U would have just fallen asleep. The story may only slightly gain but u have learned. Writing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-19 01:39:43a nice story but a quick end, next time try to create some more dramaYoungAuthorReport 2009-03-07 16:08:39not bad at all!
