WRITE MORE!!!!gordonjackxReport 2012-12-31 12:37:04Nice beginning. Also a bit of a story line would be nice so we can follow the tale and see where it leads us. xx video Also a bit of a story line would be nice so we can follow the tale and see where it leads us. Also a bit of a story line would be nice so we can follow the tale and see where it leads us. Good luck
Gordonjackxanonymous readerReport 2012-12-19 23:36:22and then you woke up found yourself on the floor you asshole«1» Good luck
Gordonjackxanonymous readerReport 2012-12-19 23:36:22and then you woke up found yourself on the floor you asshole«1» Just try to get the English right so that your readers are not distracted by it. Also a bit of a story line would be nice so we can follow the
