and you should know that every time the person talking is switched a new paragraph starts…anonymous readerReport 2010-11-03 02:40:50It is a good storty but I agree with the other comments. xx video 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-14 01:45:59i loved it cant wait for part 2anonymous readerReport 2011-04-08 21:00:15too short!!!! and you should know that every time the person talking is switched a new paragraph starts…anonymous readerReport 2010-11-03 02:40:50It is a good storty but I agree with the other comments. But short… needs to be a bit longer :-)) Will be waiting for more…Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-24 22:57:21Great story! needs to be a bit longer :-)) Will be waiting for more…Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-24 22:57:21Great story!
