It’s a good story but you need to proofread.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-31 21:10:53The spelling and sentence structure was horrible.Daddyman42081Report 2011-04-09 07:27:13please continue storyAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-27 05:39:16So how did she pass away? Is that like Thumb Wars? xx video She’s tried from swimming? 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-11 14:20:25Please write a part twoHugh_JardonReport 2012-01-07 21:25:13Toewars? How about tired? What does history got to do with it? What does history got to do with it? 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-11 14:20:25Please write a part twoHugh_JardonReport 2012-01-07 21:25:13Toewars? She’s tried from swimming? It’s a good story but you need to proofread.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-31 21:10:53The spelling and sentence structure was horrible.Daddyman42081Report 2011-04-09 07:27:13please continue storyAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-27 05:39:16So how did she pass away? What does history got to do with it? How about tired?
