=) xanonymous readerReport 2012-05-08 01:01:05If thats the best you can do at19, you need to go back to school«1» Theres not much wrong with this at all, sure it was a little lacking in detail at the end but the start was exellent. I’d advise you to continue both stories and use this one to try out ideas for the other and get feedback to make it as good as possible. x video I’d advise you to continue both stories and use this one to try out ideas for the other and get feedback to make it as good as possible. I’d advise you to continue both stories and use this one to try out ideas for the other and get feedback to make it as good as possible.
