No flow, no growth of characters, no descriptive passages of time, nothing. xxvideo seriously this thing is all over the place with zero destination same as obama and his staffanonymous readerReport 2013-04-30 15:32:11Huh? Where the ???? WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-05-01 04:02:40Plz wright more want to no ehst hsppened nextanonymous readerReport 2013-05-01 02:44:01Normally i never criticize BUIT I actually believe i am now stupider and much more mindless after reading this story. Not sure why I actually read this. Say what ?anonymous readerReport 2013-04-30 09:50:09Wow this story makes no sense.«1» was the writer obama?? Even worse are the spelling and grammar mistakes. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-19 14:30:20The basis for the story is there but the writing is not. What the ???? Where the ????
