Or are you now over them? xx video There are many more errors, as well, but the worst offense is inconsideration of your reader who must struggle through your story. Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Just need more practice, I suppose.SwingerReport 2009-09-03 15:53:36Story horny but paragraphs needed. There are many more errors, as well, but the worst offense is inconsideration of your reader who must struggle through your story. They ALL need work.«1» Would like to hear further adventures. The only story I ever wrote came out stupidly because every five minutes I’d have to stop and relieve myself. They ALL need work.«1» Work on your grammar, sentence structure, and plot.
