35 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-23 16:11:55good but you need to give the name of the privious story if you are going to mention it and this really needs a second chapter a good writer gives all stories in a series the same name with chapter numbers this is what you should do go back and do a rewrite and rename the stories also use an editor way to many goofsREADERReport 2007-12-16 19:28:32gross with the mom thing, but lucky bastard, iv been tryin to seduce my sis for a year and a half now! xvideos 35 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-23 16:11:55good but you need to give the name of the privious story if you are going to mention it and this really needs a second chapter a good writer gives all stories in a series the same name
