I write and sell a few stories. Right now you are trying to be clever. x video The “D” was pure hoke. a simple story line whould have worked much better. a simple story line whould have worked much better. good effert 9/10wordytomReport 2008-10-26 17:15:47Too gimicky. Right now you are trying to be clever. The “D” was pure hoke. Right now you are trying to be clever. The “D” was pure hoke. Don’t be clever until you first become a writer. 3 comments«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! Don’t be clever until you first become a writer. 3 comments«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! I also agree with wordytom… If yours was crap I would have moved on and not bothered. i was definatly captured all the way to the end.
