It was good, not great, just good. x video But keep on plugging away, you can improve.«1» However, I can see why there were no codes. It was believable in its content and wording. There was only a hint at sex. There was only a hint at sex. It was violent and rape was involved, but only implied. It was violent and rape was involved, but only implied. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-15 19:57:10Hey, that was a pretty good story. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-15 19:57:10Hey, that was a pretty good story. There was only a hint at sex. But keep on plugging away, you can improve.«1» It was believable in its content and wording. If I were an English Teacher, I thank the gods above that I am not, I would give this story an A.
