This will improve them greatly. x video Your creative idea is good, but you really need help in getting it into a nice readable form.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 14:01:05You need to use tags.«1» You have a lot of improperly used punctuation marks. You don’t know what words to capitalize or how to pluralize (most words are pluralized by adding “s”, or “ies”, but never ” ‘s”. Your creative idea is good, but you really need help in getting it into a nice readable form.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 14:01:05You need to use tags.«1» Your creative idea is good, but you really need help in getting it into a nice readable form.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 14:01:05You need to use tags.«1»
