But compared to most of the stories on here that REALLY need to use the spell check, I’d say this was better than most. xx video Mystic599READERReport 2008-03-30 21:22:51this was an ok story would have ben a lot better if it had some comdey and a good plot like my sister ashley which is an exelent story as is this this oneREADERReport 2008-02-18 09:17:31great story wish i was him«12345» Only a few spots where you should have used the spell check before submitting. Mystic599READERReport 2008-03-30 21:22:51this was an ok story would have ben a lot better if it had some comdey and a good plot like my sister ashley which is an exelent story as is this this oneREADERReport 2008-02-18 09:17:31great story wish i was him«12345» But compared to most of the stories on here that REALLY
