its great… 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-30 16:59:45It was a good story, but it needs serious reformatting. x video It was good enough for me to struggle through the brick of words, but it needs paragraphs like a motherfucker.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-30 11:26:30I’m trying to figure why this story has a shit score… its great… part 2 will be worth the wait!«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-30 16:59:45It was a good story, but it needs serious reformatting. its great… its great… its great… It was good enough for me to struggle through the brick of words, but it needs paragraphs like a motherfucker.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-30 11:26:30I’m trying to figure why this story has a shit score… Huge blocks of text will have many people bitching. Huge blocks of text will have many people bitching. It was good enough for me




















