it was just wam bam thank you mamanonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:20:33This had so much potential to be a better story. Finally, if you are going to write a sex story, or any story for that matter, make the theme, in this case, the actual sex, take up more than 4 paragraphs. xx video No offense. She’s way too full of herself. …and ‘Cum on my PRETTY face? . . …I gave it a thumbs down. …anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 04:19:37I liked the story, however, as a writer, there are some things I want to point out for you to improve upon. 🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. I’m looking forward to seeing your work again :)«123» I’m looking forward to seeing your work again :)«123»
