This is the first time I’ve posted stories to this site and I did not realize that the paragraph breaks were not visible as they are in my original document. xx video 4 comments«1»greeneyes72Report 2012-10-19 15:47:02I am so sorry everyone for the formatting errors! Almost all of the other writers here do. Please use normal English structure. I’m put off reading it before I start because it looks straining on the eyes!«1» I promise the next stories will be formatted correctly so that they may be enjoyed. PS: I will resubmit this and my other story with the necessary paragraph breaks!!anonymous readerReport 2012-10-19 04:15:03Yes, that is a fine wall of text you built, sir.
