(countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 12:19:13I enjoyed your story even though it contained many misspelled words. You did a fine job, please continue on with more chapters with one or more of the four ladies as the main chick !!! x video Haven’t you ever heard of proof-reading BEFORE submitting your story? You did a fine job, please continue on with more chapters with one or more of the four ladies as the main chick !!! You should also learn how to correctly use quotation marks and apostrophes. It would have been so much better if you could spell better or at least knew a literate friend who would proof-read your story and correct the errors.
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