5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-24 22:20:49qine naneReal NavyReport 2009-10-23 18:43:36Navy Man, my ass. xxvideo They’re SHIPS not boats. They’re SHIPS not boats. HE HUGGED THE WOMAN AND WALKED OUT THE DOOR IS A BAD BREAK IN SEQUENCE«1» 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-24 22:20:49qine naneReal NavyReport 2009-10-23 18:43:36Navy Man, my ass. You had a whole paragraph consisting of a single sentence. You had a whole paragraph consisting of a single sentence. Boats are for bathtubs and rubber duckys! They’re SHIPS not boats. HE HUGGED THE WOMAN AND WALKED OUT THE DOOR IS A BAD BREAK IN SEQUENCE«1» HE HUGGED THE WOMAN AND WALKED OUT THE DOOR IS A BAD BREAK IN SEQUENCE«1» Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read.
