This story has definite potential. With a bit of polishing it could pass as reasonably good.«12» With a bit of polishing it could pass as reasonably good.«12» Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is hard. xvideos (most writers at this site treat description like a drivers license with bra/penis size. This story has definite potential. but u gotta improve … but u gotta improve … With a bit of polishing it could pass as reasonably good.«12» try getting claire and katie in the story if u wanna describe it as incest …READERReport 2005-11-01 16:19:01u need to bring the daughter in, and archaic’s right, too choppy, it dosen’t flowREADERReport 2005-10-23 12:28:21It was kind of choppy and hard to follow.
