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Paragraphs are necessary, by using about five sentences for EACH paragraph and/or the changing of the thought processes or using more quotes of conversation to break into paragrpahs. So much information is missing that even the reader’s imagination can’t overcome!Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-22 02:38:58YER STORIES ARE SHIT JUST SO YOU KNOW MATEAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-19 04:08:59Ok that’s throwed off but a touching storyanonymous readerReport 2013-10-10 14:23:16D story is Good as well I love itjdm320Report 2013-10-01 11:29:09Story was not bad. There are minimal grammatical errors. The most valid subject that is missing is no insight into the second pregnancy of sister Mary, and the secrecy leading to or causing her to get pregnant the second time with someone other than her brother Sean!!! The writing format, structure and construction are lacking in many areas.
