If you can’t do any better than this then give it up and don’t submit excrement like this anymore!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 16:36:24Your grammar and spelling need improvement, especially your lack of upper case letters. xxx video Actually this story sucked ass just like the ignorant and I use the loosely (author) who wrote it!!! If you can’t do any better than this then give it up and don’t submit excrement like this anymore!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 16:36:24Your grammar and spelling need improvement, especially your lack of upper case letters. Actually this story sucked ass just like the ignorant and I use the loosely (author) who wrote it!!! 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-10 23:37:49You say this is your first story, if you intend to write another, please wait until you graduae from colllege and your major was English, but
