You rushed it. xx video 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”. and thats all it is Fantasy. good story«123» You rushed it. good story«123» The storyline was nice but like I said not enough details.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-01 03:29:44awsome story 10/10READERReport 2007-09-28 00:14:32cool he should have cryed and begged more but very goodREADERReport 2005-09-12 00:32:29it was an “okay” story, if it was longer it would have been better and i know that this is fiction but making it a little more realistic would help. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”. You rushed it. The storyline was nice but like I said not enough details.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-01 03:29:44awsome story 10/10READERReport 2007-09-28 00:14:32cool he should have cryed and begged more but very goodREADERReport 2005-09-12 00:32:29it was an “okay”
