Don’t be clever until you first become a writer. 3 comments«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! xx video Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack of detail and description of there settings. The “D” was pure hoke. i was definatly captured all the way to the end. a simple story line whould have worked much better. The “D” was pure hoke. i was definatly captured all the way to the end. good effert 9/10wordytomReport 2008-10-26 17:15:47Too gimicky. The “D” was pure hoke. good effert 9/10wordytomReport 2008-10-26 17:15:47Too gimicky. 3 comments«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack of detail and description of there settings.
