=dreamer=«1» =dreamer=«1» =dreamer=«1» =dreamer=«1» 2 comments«1»AquaMastaReport 2009-09-02 05:30:08Getting better, I like the story line but a little more “sex” or at least some touching would be nice. also if you were to make it a bit longer and add a little discripion to some characters so we can kind of get a feel for them, get to know them a bit :p Great story, Hope to read more!Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-19 06:13:13The plot was interesting, but rushed and convoluted. x video 2 comments«1»AquaMastaReport 2009-09-02 05:30:08Getting better, I like the story line but a little more “sex” or at least some touching would be nice. If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue.
