it is ruining the story line… xxvideo the first chapter was good.. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-14 20:58:48Nice twist with the sister being a he/she or he a guy raised as a girl. no more incest… it is ruining the story line… the first chapter was good.. You need more segues between events.«1» you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … the first chapter was good.. it is ruining the story line… this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. the first chapter was good.. this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. the first chapter was good..
