How bout a rewrite and actually take your time in writtng it read other stories like Uncle Tim’s Delema maybe that will show you how to better your writing skills
~shadowmancer13666~anonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 23:49:0346D Tits46D Tits46D Tits46D Tits46D Tits46D Tits *yawn* naaah.. xvideos 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-25 00:13:15wow I can see you really effort into this one. not good enough«1» not good enough«1» How bout a rewrite and actually take your time in writtng it read other stories like Uncle Tim’s Delema maybe that will show you how to better your writing skills
~shadowmancer13666~anonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 23:49:0346D Tits46D Tits46D Tits46D Tits46D Tits46D Tits *yawn* naaah.. not good enough«1» not good enough«1» not good enough«1» How bout a rewrite and actually take your time in writtng it read other stories like Uncle Tim’s Delema maybe that will show
