Otherwise good story.«1» Otherwise good story.«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-12 11:26:12dEJOqn However, the author created a cool thing..!anonymous readerReport 2011-05-30 18:19:11Use the categories properlyanonymous readerReport 2011-05-30 13:36:11Yea it was my first story so still working out the kinksanonymous readerReport 2011-05-30 13:09:29Make more parts. xvideos 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-12 11:26:12dEJOqn However, the author created a cool thing..!anonymous readerReport 2011-05-30 18:19:11Use the categories properlyanonymous readerReport 2011-05-30 13:36:11Yea it was my first story so still working out the kinksanonymous readerReport 2011-05-30 13:09:29Make more parts. Use paragraphs and make the next one a bit longer. Use paragraphs and make the next one a bit longer. Otherwise good story.«1» Otherwise good story.«1» Use paragraphs and make the next one a bit longer. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-12 11:26:12dEJOqn However, the author created a cool thing..!anonymous readerReport 2011-05-30 18:19:11Use the categories properlyanonymous readerReport 2011-05-30 13:36:11Yea it was my first story
