The solid wall of text like you use is daunting and hard to read. x video I said “No way.”. 9andahalf/10
try to split up your paragraphs xxREADERReport 2007-06-19 13:23:08this is shite wher is the decent shite«12» 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 15:48:12Did you ever hear of paragraphing? It would make your story much easier to read. It would make your story much easier to read. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 15:48:12Did you ever hear of paragraphing? It would make your story much easier to read. I said “No way.”. The solid wall of text like you use is daunting and hard to read. I said “No way.”. Sue replied “Why not, Dad?”). Also, it would help if you learned to use quotation marks and wrote in first person (i.e. Also, it would help if you learned to
