I got lost immediantly because I didn’t know who was talking.«1» Dude– PROOFREADING is a Good thing! I got lost immediantly because I didn’t know who was talking.Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-20 21:44:26Could you possibly put quotations to seperate who is talking. xxvideo I got lost immediantly because I didn’t know who was talking.«1» I agree, great story line, but very hard to read. I agree, great story line, but very hard to read. It had all the tags for a great story,
but it was totally UNreadable!!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-20 21:53:26Could you possibly put quotations to seperate who is talking. I agree, great story line, but very hard to read. I got lost immediantly because I didn’t know who was talking.Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-20 21:44:26Could you possibly put quotations to seperate who is talking.
