(countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-22 20:48:18The premise is good but there are many errors. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 22:44:43A bunch of errors in the first para are not a good start
Did u not proof read or spellcheck???anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 14:18:11Make a little longer b4 you end it.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 10:19:20Great story line but it ended too soon. xxvideo 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 22:44:43A bunch of errors in the first para are not a good start
Did u not proof read or spellcheck???anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 14:18:11Make a little longer b4 you end it.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 10:19:20Great story line but it ended too soon. (countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-22 20:48:18The premise is good but there are many errors.
