then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. xx video then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. 4 comments«1»coffeemanReport 2012-07-14 10:02:02I love your stories!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 19:59:08Story starts off very well. . . . . … then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. 4 comments«1»coffeemanReport 2012-07-14 10:02:02I love your stories!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 19:59:08Story starts off very well. . . . . … then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. 4 comments«1»coffeemanReport 2012-07-14 10:02:02I love your stories!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 19:59:08Story starts off very well. . . . . … then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. Better details and longer plot are what’s neededAnonymous readerReport 2008-07-16 13:25:19very well written, i thought it was verry goodAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-13 02:20:02that seems terrible…«1»
