3/10 only because you wrote a story and were able to separate your thoughts into paragraphs. xx video it was short and the plot barely exists at all. Try to be a little more vivid when you write. The spelling and grammar are an insult to my intelligence. This story did nothing for me. it was short and the plot barely exists at all. The spelling and grammar are an insult to my intelligence. I agree with those people… The poor form relegates this story to ash heap of shitty porn stories.READERReport 2004-07-16 04:38:29i think that that story was a bit too forward and un-natural, and yeah, i agree, needs more deatil.READERReport 2004-07-15 17:22:23I thought this story was OK.
