1/10«12» 1/10«12» Hereing??? If edited for grammar and such would be better but otherwise don’t dange and good luck on any future story you might write. xxvideo Hereing??? If edited for grammar and such would be better but otherwise don’t dange and good luck on any future story you might write. 8/10READERReport 2007-06-02 07:06:26Hereing the door open???? If edited for grammar and such would be better but otherwise don’t dange and good luck on any future story you might write. 1/10«12» 1/10«12» 6 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-11 00:34:54Typos and grammar are overrated, I loved this story, I could barely get thru it all!READERReport 2007-06-16 21:07:54great story lol 14 and no sex at allREADERReport 2007-06-16 21:07:54great story lol 14 and no sex at allREADERReport 2007-06-16 20:01:48Great story, a few typo’s here and there (but who doesn’t make mistakes).
