Girl mostly in charge.«123» Also was a little short but all in all a good storyanonymous readerReport 2011-05-05 20:27:58pretty good 7/10. put more romance into it, and a little buildup.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-05 00:16:55Like the commentor below me said, you can do this, but you need to work on proofreading what you have written.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-28 08:33:38You need to Proofread, Spell Check, Keep the Gender Stright, keep the story flow stright and your good to go. xxx video Also was a little short but all in all a good storyanonymous readerReport 2011-05-05 20:27:58pretty good 7/10. put more romance into it, and a little buildup.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-05 00:16:55Like the commentor below me said, you can do this, but you need to work on proofreading what you have written.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-28 08:33:38You need to Proofread, Spell Check, Keep the Gender Stright, keep
