Grammar? xx video Grammar? Work on all three and your story tellin will be better.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 08:26:21just shut up and let em fuck«12» But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex. Spelling? But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too. Grammar? Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too.
