Taking constructive criticism as a positive will only make the writer a much better writer. It’s as if the two chapters are TOTALLY different as to the characters, as to the content and the context of the two stories, as if there is any connection whatsoever!! x video Throughout, there are many examples and traits of brilliant writing, both now and future writing potential. Taking constructive criticism as a positive will only make the writer a much better writer. I wish he had written moreAnonymous readerReport 2015-07-10 16:15:15Duh! Additionally, several–more than three or four–sentences do not make any sense, partially due to missing commas (,)–the separation of ‘thought processes or change of thought direction–which would have been less confusing with proper punctuation.
