You found the line of submission without being corny. xxx video Can’t wait to read more.baller16Report 2009-07-25 20:57:31I liked it. Can’t wait to read more.baller16Report 2009-07-25 20:57:31I liked it. I liked both characters and the situation. You found the line of submission without being corny. You found the line of submission without being corny. 13 comments«123»sk_liaReport 2010-12-22 18:55:38Brilliant story! 13 comments«123»sk_liaReport 2010-12-22 18:55:38Brilliant story! You found the line of submission without being corny. There was no BS, there was no guy stroking his own ego(most likely because a female wrote it), the plot and setting was completely straightforward, and you didn’t only write about one aspect of the situation. And even though you didn’t get into the guy’s point of view too much, you still let people understand his point of view.«123»




















