Again, description is a little better, grammar is still absolutely terrible, and I have no idea what the character, who I’m guessing is Ellen, looks like. xxvideo Also please go into a bit more detail about his passed, what made his family resent him so bad, and treat him the way they did. I understood that by the way you described Eric with the black spiky hair.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 17:21:52xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxanonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 17:21:51xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxanonymous readerReport 2012-04-27 00:30:52great story, please keep writing more«12» This is because there really is little to no description on the main character at all. You say his body is “gender confused”. I’m asking this because from what I’ve ready, it seems like the characters are gay, which doesn’t bother me, any, but I’d like to see you fill in the blankness of
