From what I read I would give it a 7.6 out of 10. xxx video Ken Doesn’t have a job? Ken Doesn’t have a job? If it’s only a fantasy story, make yourself taller, change the daughter’s name to Mindy or Wendy, explain what is wrong with your son (ie Bi-polar or ??)
Not a BAD story – just needs some improvement.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-11 02:18:40For the most part it’s a decent story from what I read but could be better. Keep going at it, just try and edit the background of the story as well as the way you word your words. Keep writing.Ghostrider939Report 2012-09-30 21:21:41Main problem, Hank, is HUGE sentences.
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