1 comments«1»Mark TwaynReport 2010-04-15 19:46:37The story was pretty good. xxvideo Try having paragraphs no more than five lines long and please, forget the bold type.«1» Try having paragraphs no more than five lines long and please, forget the bold type.«1» 1 comments«1»Mark TwaynReport 2010-04-15 19:46:37The story was pretty good. But it was really tough to read. Try having paragraphs no more than five lines long and please, forget the bold type.«1» Try having paragraphs no more than five lines long and please, forget the bold type.«1» 1 comments«1»Mark TwaynReport 2010-04-15 19:46:37The story was pretty good. Try having paragraphs no more than five lines long and please, forget the bold type.«1» 1 comments«1»Mark TwaynReport 2010-04-15 19:46:37The story was pretty good. But it was really tough to read. Try having paragraphs no more than five lines long and
