But yeah, don’t switch so much between scenes. x video it is ruining the story line… no more incest… no more incest… You need more segues between events.«1» no more incest… you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … the first chapter was good.. no more incest… it is ruining the story line… you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … it is ruining the story line… the first chapter was good.. no more incest… this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. But yeah, don’t switch so much between scenes. no more incest… You need more segues between events.«1» it is ruining the story line…
