It was a good story and i didnt notice any grammatical errors that were obvious enough to see them in one read without scanning for them. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-26 22:46:18only a real ass would leave a story posted in this condition DELETE at once and rewrite it properly. x video as is this sucks big time and is totally unreadable.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-09 01:27:37duskflair i am a member of 3es series from somestory this story was great i think u should write more on the brother sister deal very good it wasnt hard to read that first commenter was a complete jack ass you did great man love the story and thank you for finishing somestory’s 3ES story for the fansanonymous readerReport 2012-04-05 04:09:16a critical comment is good…
