Good job!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-24 18:47:21Hey, I really like this. Don’t listen to most of the other negative comments…they were probably just pissed b/c of the repeats. x video Don’t listen to most of the other negative comments…they were probably just pissed b/c of the repeats. I agree you could’ve made it longer though. Fuck that mess. But great writing.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-24 19:00:24Hey, I really like this. Good job!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-24 18:47:21Hey, I really like this. Really? Good job!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-24 18:47:21Hey, I really like this. I like how you incorporate emotion, specifically guilt- I like those elements in a rape story. But great writing.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-24 19:00:24Hey, I really like this. 29 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-05-11 23:07:41Great story…I just don’t like how she immediately forgave him.
