5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-10-06 10:54:17bhbvvfjhbghbgvggbn gggnjhhgtgtgb hhhhvgvgk,jkjghjjji,,jkjikkoillpojjhukkk;lanonymous readerReport 2012-08-25 11:48:14Much better grammar wise…great story..can hardly wait for 4 some that’s coming keep writing those chaptersanonymous readerReport 2012-08-24 03:20:30keep writing,i liked it just try to make less spelling mistakes but overall it was greatkinkybitch1Report 2012-08-24 00:27:24I agree with what the other person has writtenanonymous readerReport 2012-08-23 10:05:41I suggest you write the story one day then proof read and correct it the next. x video -«1» -«1» -«1» -«1» 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-10-06 10:54:17bhbvvfjhbghbgvggbn gggnjhhgtgtgb hhhhvgvgk,jkjghjjji,,jkjikkoillpojjhukkk;lanonymous readerReport 2012-08-25 11:48:14Much better grammar wise…great story..can hardly wait for 4 some that’s coming keep writing those chaptersanonymous readerReport 2012-08-24 03:20:30keep writing,i liked it just try to make less spelling mistakes but overall it was greatkinkybitch1Report 2012-08-24 00:27:24I agree with what the other person has writtenanonymous readerReport 2012-08-23 10:05:41I suggest you write the story one day then proof read
